Handling Complex Information

drawing done with artist pen

this first impressionistic drawing has many good aspects to it such as detail within buildings in foreground and further way we can get an impression of rest of city. the lines on building help give the building form in the buildings it helps to define the walls and roof. there is some good impressions of not just buildings but of tress and bushes as well. these are good however there should be different marking in order to show different types of tress and show depth to the tress as it is hard to tell between different trees. also the the tree and house in foreground are halved images to improve this would be to include the full tree and house. 

this image has some good techniques such as use of line in this to give form on the buildings, we also have some nice impression of windows thought this image as we can we see windows placed on the buildings, this make them more recognisable as building rather than just random 3D shape. we have implied line within this image as viewers eyes can follow top of chimney to other tall lines in the horizon, these are also areas of interest as thee objects are tallest in landscape which makes them stand out most. 

this drawing has some improvements compared to previous images such as the tress impressions have verity of different mark making which helps them distinguish them from one another, we also have good form  on hills as they are more defined in this image last improve is the addition of sky, the quick line work helps to give an impression of sky. this image has more defined foreground, midground and background as the addition of sky adds to this as we can see that horizon line and sky make up the background.