charcoal
this image has some good tone as we can see the left side of the image has stronger dark values. the darker values also help give form to the faces such as the nose which has strong values as the curve into the face this helps to give form and shape to image. areas need to be improved are the pupils in the eyes as one seems to be far to off to the right where other is centre, perhaps tying to create the illusion that model looking at something but looks more as if crossed eyed if pupil on left was moved slightly more to left would look more natural
artist pen
this side view of head has some good proportion, there is some good detail with hairs and ear makes the drawing more life like. the eye shape is off it does curve around the head like eye should but shape of eye lids arent correct. there is very little shading evident in this image the only areas that have any indication of tone are some of the hairs as they seem to have darker values that some of the other.
graphite stick
there are some small details added to show imperfections in person such as scars, marks on skin,lips and ear lobe shape, this are details that help make the more identifiable as person. there is darker tones under the eyes and tones around the nose help to shape and form the nose. some areas that need improvement is the month as upper lip is to big and to large a gap between the nose to mouth.



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