Architectural rendering

 artist pen with promarker

this landscape has some nice shading such as the darker values on the dome help to show some of the light reflecting on the dom. it also used on the glass to help so some of the reflection. there is a good use of line on bottom of the entrance as it helps to give a 3D view of the entrance and some depth. the main focus point of the image is the entrance as has most detail within the image various  lines and hues to keep viewers interested. We do see some Foreshortening within road such as top of road on left however problems within this landscapes is perspective in the road as road seems slanting to right side, the building is on slight hill so should be more diagonal.

some areas that need to be improved is the use of line as rest of the image uses a very thin pen tip, a more thicker line on the image would help give the image better shape as this image is close up image so thicker line would help define shape of the entrance also define more of the foreground and the addition of a background would help create more appealing landscape.

pen with promarker

this image uses the promarker to help with highlights in the dome as you can see, the highlights help give form to the dome and also make it an area of interest. the highlights in the dome also create an implied  line across the dome. The is some improvements compared to pervious image such clear understanding of foreground, midground and background.

there is some foreshortening in this image for example the beams across the bottom of dome have foreshorten effect. there is also some impressionism event for example the people although not fully detail they give impression of people walking, these are also an area of interest. other impressions event are the bricks on pavement and also the bricks on the road. Main focal point is the dome as strong highlights, Foreshortening draws viewers eyes, the dome also takes up most of midground and left side of rule of thirds that eyes are drawn towards it.

 Indian ink

this image has some good impressionistic technique, we can see on the ground and building some impression of brick work, the ground brick work helps to show the curving brick in the ground, the building has varying values to show darker and lighter bricks in the building. there are also some impression of people within the foreground , they are silhouettes but can be identified as people, this gives the image some life as we have people sitting walking.

 the main focal point of this landscape is the "forsters" building as its largest building and most detailed as we see through the glass bottom, and the impressionistic bricks, the building is also sits in the centre lef in the rule of thirds and from here we have actual line with help guides the viewers eyes across rest of the image such as the roofs in both midground and background. there is some areas of interest such as the buildings in midground of image. the clouds is an area of interest as we have  variety of different values within the clouds, this is to give impression of different clouds and different values within the clouds.